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NaNoWriMo Day 12

New words: 2,762
Total words: 19,524
Goal: 50,000

19524 / 50000
(39.05%)


I finally made it through the entire draft doing the dialog. Of course, I haven't written all the dialogue. If I wasn't sure of something, I skipped it. Now I plan to go back through and figure out the parts I like best, and make sure those get supported and expanded before I really dig into adding action and blocking bits.

I am starting to have an image of the ending of the story, one that is both interesting and wraps up the immediate conflict, but leaves enough hanging for there to be plenty of material for the next novel.

I have also been experimenting a bit with writing from an omniscient point of view. Something that would allow me to get in the heads of characters as I choose, or not. It's REALLY hard.

I've always preferred Alternating Third Person Subjective, with a clear delineation in the text (marked by a paragraph change and a symbol, like a centered – or ***) when the point of view changes. Point of view has always been a conscious element of my stories, in which I could show different characters reflecting on the same thing and explore their totally different perspectives on that thing . It is one of the more Artistic elements in my writing.

And my third person has always been as close to first person as you can get without actually writing in the first person. The "voice" in the narrative is the point of view character's, I write the way they talk when I'm in their head.

Changing that style to a more omniscient POV is going to be a challenge, especially if I want to keep the intimacy of third person subjective.

There is a form of the omniscient view point that is kind of like a screenplay, where you never get into any character's head. Everything is the "camera-eye" view, but you have the freedom to go anywhere, show any character doing anything.

While I found writing in screenplay format rather freeing while working on the Destroyer, doing it in a regular narrative format lacks intimacy. I think readers want to be with the character, living the story through them, not just observers, and for that, a story needs introspection.

Another form of omniscient viewpoint switches between character's heads within a single scene, sometimes within a single paragraph. There are so many ways to screw that up and confuse the reader. But I think that's what I need to figure out how to do.

Eep.



Comments

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ponygirl2000
Nov. 13th, 2011 03:13 am (UTC)
I'm a big fan of the tight third person POV myself, but I do run into trouble with pacing and giving out all the necessary information.

I was thinking that Terry Pratchett does a good job of doing third person with omniscience, he'll be in a character's head but then throw in an aside or a bit of history.
masqthephlsphr
Nov. 13th, 2011 12:50 pm (UTC)
I think I do need to read some writers who are successful with it to see how it's done. I write like I write partially because it's comfortable and familiar.
cornerofmadness
Nov. 13th, 2011 04:03 am (UTC)
ominiscent pov is very hard to do and even when done well it can get annoying. good luck
masqthephlsphr
Nov. 13th, 2011 03:17 pm (UTC)
Well, it's just one of the techniques I am trying to do with this Too Much Information issue. I am brainstorming plot devices as well.
cornerofmadness
Nov. 13th, 2011 08:14 pm (UTC)
yes you've mentioned several times about having characters who know too much or at least more than the reader needs at that moment
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